Question

五一長假即將來臨，作為初三畢業(yè)生的你，打算怎樣度過這個(gè)假期？你會(huì)和家人去旅行還是呆在家里認(rèn)真復(fù)習(xí)？根據(jù)下面的建議，請你給自己寫個(gè)五一假期計(jì)劃。
我先要制定好計(jì)劃如何安排我的假期,以確保勞逸結(jié)合。
我要認(rèn)真完成所有的作業(yè)，絕不馬虎對待。必要時(shí)打電話問老師。
我還要進(jìn)行體育鍛煉,為嚴(yán)格的體育考試做準(zhǔn)備。
我還要……。
要求：涵蓋以上要點(diǎn)，不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。
字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。
The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior, who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday.___________________________________    

Answer 1

The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday. First I need to make a plan for this holiday so that I can learn well and have a good rest as well. I must finish all my homework carefully, I mustn’t be careless with my homework. When I have problems with my homework, I will call my teachers to ask for help if necessary. And I plan to take exercise to get ready for the strict PE tests. I plan to go over/review my notes, I don’t want to waste the time, After June, when I take exams, I think I can have a really relaxing holiday.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求給自己制定一個(gè)五一假期計(jì)劃。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。