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提示：每個人都會遇到許多人和事，都會或多或少對你產(chǎn)生影響，使你感悟，令你深思。請你結(jié)合自己的初中生活和真實(shí)感受，以“A good teacher in my eyes”為題寫一英語篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50-60個。
要求：1.緊扣主題，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。
2.文中不得到出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名及地名。
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Answer 1

A good teacher in my eyes
I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher. She is a woman of medium height. She is in her thirties. Her name is Nancy.
I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons. To start with, she spent a lot of her spare time talking with us, helping us with problems in study and personal life. Second, the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun. I enjoy every minute of her lesson. And third, Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever. Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，以“我眼中的好老師”為題寫一篇作文。寫作時，要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的完整性，在寫人記事時都要表達(dá)清晰，邏輯思維嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。尤其要主語主謂一致，在使用不同的時態(tài)時動詞要發(fā)生變化。句子之間注意銜接。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清晰，用了很多比較復(fù)雜的詞匯和句子。例如：I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher.我很幸運(yùn)遇到了很多好老師，其中印象最深的是我的引語老師。 among whom引導(dǎo)是個定語從句，其中又用了形容詞最高級。I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons我把nancy認(rèn)為是好老師有三個原因；Refard….as….把…認(rèn)為…。還有spend time doing sth.花時間做……; no…but….不是…而是…；等等。另外文章陳述三個理由，用了To start with；Second；And third使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰明了。