Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(本題有1題，共15分)
以“How I have changed!”為題，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章介紹你這幾年來(lái)的變化，包括學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法，外型，性格，喜好，害怕的東西，生活方式這幾個(gè)方面的變化。文章開(kāi)頭已給出�？赡苡玫降膯卧~.(by doing ,used to, shy,  long hair,  hate, rules, be afraid of, _changed_  ……)
How I have changed！
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Answer 1

One possible version:
How I've changed Time past quickly.I've changed a lot with the time going. When I was young,I only know the most interesting thing in the world is playing.I played games with my friends day and night.I wasted a lot of great time. But when I was a little older,I not only know playing.I realize learning is as important as playing,even much more important.I spent my whole day to study,study and study.but at that time,I do not know what "stress" means. Then,two years later,I understood.I was going to graduate from primary school and,I need to pass a special test for the entrance of junior high school.I have no time to play.I have no time to have fun with my good friends. After I had passed the examination,I felt more nervous than any time I was.Everybody was smart and I didn't have the great position.But I don't know what “give up" is.I spent more time on the subject I was not good at.So I won the first position later. That's How I've changed.My life bocomes harder and harder,but I am not scared.I try my best to let my life become more interesting.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，介紹自己過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在的生活的變化。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題，然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【兩點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和從句，在敘述中使用連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: …… as important as playing和玩一樣重要，try my best to盡力做某事，等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.