Question

你叫Lucy,你的筆友Tom想要更好的了解你個人愛好。請你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容,介紹一下你的喜好和原因,至少補充一條。

	Names	Reasons
Group	Westlife	energetic, good singers, look cool ,wear cool clothes
Movie	Spider Man	wonderful, exciting
Book	Romeo and Juliet	moving ,beautiful words
…	…	…

 要求：
1. 用上提綱中的信息,并允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 要求用上至少兩個定語從句;
3. 內(nèi)容充實,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范。詞數(shù)90左右。
Dear Tom,
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Lucy

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my after-class hobbies with you. The music group that I like best is Westlife. I like it because they are good singers. They are really energetic. They wear cool clothes and they look cool. My favorite movie is Spider Man. I think it is wonderful and exciting. I like reading. And my favorite book is Romeo and Juliet, the famous book written by Shakespear. It is moving and it has beautiful words. What’s more, the subject I like best is PE, because I like sports and I can play with my friends in PE class. What about you? Can you tell me about your hobbies. Write to me soon.
Lucy

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，利用圖表的形式，介紹了我最喜歡的樂隊、電影和書。我們要根據(jù)表格中的提示把這些用英語表達出來。并且題目中有要求要至少再補充一條我的愛好，所以寫作時要注意。通過審題我們可以知道寫這篇短文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；因為介紹的是自己的愛好，所以人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱。注意題目中要求要至少用兩個定語從句，寫作時要注意這一要求。另外寫作時要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文意連貫，文章表達流暢、得體。
【亮點說明】這篇短文中使用了較多的句型、短語和從句。例如定語從句的使用，The music group that I like best is、the subject I like best等。其他從句的使用如I like it because…、 I think it is…等。另外短文中還用了一些短語，如written by Shakespear、 What’s more等。文章內(nèi)容表達流暢，符合題目要求。層次分明，富有條理。