Question

丹東是中國(guó)最美的邊境城市，如何讓更多的人來(lái)了解丹東？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章，介紹一下我們的家鄉(xiāng)�？蓪�(xiě)它的地理位置、氣候、物產(chǎn)、美食等等以及你對(duì)它的感情。
要求： 1.字跡工整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范
2. 80詞左右

Answer 1

Dandong City in Liaoning province is located in southeastern China. It is China’s largest border city and it has a population of 81 million. It is surrounded by green mountains on three sides.
It is rich in prawn, swimming crab, clam and various fishes. It is famous for fresh and live marine products, which is praised by gastronomes. There are many natural and human scenery spots such as the Tiger Cave, the Camel Peak.The Moon Bay surrounded by the Island and the Double-Pearl Beach are the biggest natural bathing beaches in the corner of the northern sea in China and are the ideal places where people go to pick shells, see the sun rise and listen to the sea waves. I love my hometown.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，讓我們介紹丹東這個(gè)城市,可以從這個(gè)城市的地理位置、氣候、物產(chǎn)、風(fēng)景等方面著手介紹。更重要的是在文章中要表達(dá)出你對(duì)這個(gè)城市的感情。通過(guò)分析我們可以知道這篇文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)和主語(yǔ)的一致，并且多使用短語(yǔ)和句型以使行文連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，行文連貫，敘述完整。按要求從丹東的地理位置、人口、特產(chǎn)、風(fēng)景等方面為我們介紹了丹東這個(gè)城市，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。并且文中運(yùn)用了一些較好的句型如has a population of 、is surrounded by  、are the ideal places where people go to pick shells等，為文章增色不少。