Question

國(guó)有國(guó)法，校有校規(guī)。在你的學(xué)校中一定有很多規(guī)章制度來(lái)規(guī)范中學(xué)生的行為，使學(xué)生們都能健康成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇小短文向大家介紹一些校規(guī)、校紀(jì)，如能用自己的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)評(píng)價(jià)就更好了。（80詞左右）開頭已給出。
What rules do you have in your school?
There’re a lot of rules in our school.
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Answer 1

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I'd like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms ,we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.              

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: There are有……；have to不得不；I'd like to我喜歡……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。