Question

本周末我班級將舉行英語演講比賽，要求每位同學(xué)用英語介紹一位自己最喜歡的電影明星的情況。假設(shè)你最喜歡的電影明星是張曼玉。請根據(jù)下面的表格用英語準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿。要點如下：

外貌	才華	經(jīng)歷	獎項
美麗，謙虛 明亮的眼睛 中等身材	豐富的表演經(jīng)驗 擅長中文，英語和法語 有天賦的女演員 擅長表演機(jī)智的偵探角色	1964年9月20日出生于香港 8歲時搬到英國 17歲返回香港 成為演員之前做過模特	首次在電影The Frog Prince中露面 在臺灣金馬電影節(jié)中（Tai Wan Golden Horse Film Festival）, 獲得最佳女演員獎。

注意：
1. 要求包括內(nèi)容要點，語句通順、意思連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)：90左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù);
3. 你從張曼玉的演藝生涯中學(xué)到了什么，請至少表達(dá)兩點。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite film star Zhang Manyu.
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Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite film star Zhang Manyu. Zhang Manyu is a very famous actress who has achieved many rewards. Her first film was The Frog Prince. And she won the best actress in Tai Wan Golden Horse Film Festival. She is a pretty woman with clear eyes and of medium build. She is a very modest and talented actress. She has rich acting experience. She is good at acting smart police. She does well in Chinese, English and French. She was born in Hongkong on 20^th September in 1964 and moved to England when she was at the age of 8. She returned to Hongkong when she was 17 years old. She was a model before she became an actress. I think Zhang Manyu because she is very hardworking. She has made a lot of films and won a lot of rewards. I will work hard at my lessons just like her. And I also think I will study hard and make my dream come true.

試題分析：這篇短文是寫一篇演講稿，介紹自己最喜愛的明星—張曼玉。在表格中給出了關(guān)于張曼玉的比較詳細(xì)的資料，我們需要用正確的英語將其表達(dá)出來。除此之外，我們還需注意要表達(dá)一下你從張曼玉身上學(xué)到了什么，而且要說兩點，這個是需要自己發(fā)揮的情況。所以文章的結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)主要分為兩部分，一是介紹張曼玉的情況；而是從她身上所學(xué)到的東西。通過分析可知，這篇文章應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意不要錯亂。另外還應(yīng)注意文章表達(dá)的連貫、流暢。
【亮點說明】這篇短文比較全面的介紹了張曼玉的基本情況，要點全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。其中一些短語和連詞的使用使得文章意思連貫，表達(dá)更流暢，如Zhang Manyu is a very famous actress who has achieved many rewards、She is a pretty woman with clear eyes and of medium build、I think Zhang Manyu because she is…等。稍微欠缺的地方就是自由發(fā)揮的地方，從張曼玉身上學(xué)到了什么，表達(dá)比較籠統(tǒng)。