Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1小題，計(jì)15分）
假設(shè)你是Tony,今年寒假要去參加由市共青團(tuán)組織的赴澳大利亞“綠色之旅” 冬令營(yíng)（winter camp）活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)一些提示，寫(xiě)一篇在開(kāi)營(yíng)式上的自我介紹。介紹必須包含要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)拓展。要求詞數(shù)在70-80之間，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
要點(diǎn)提示：
英文名字（Tony），來(lái)自中國(guó)杭州, 出生于1998年。(was born in 出生于)
經(jīng)常鍛煉。每天吃水果蔬菜，喝牛奶；很少吃垃圾食品
學(xué)校離家兩公里；騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)
與好朋友Tom比較：Tom比你高，比你文靜；你更外向。
你打算：努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得好成績(jī)
I’m very glad to introduce(介紹)myself to all of you . ___________________________________
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Answer 1

I'm very glad to introduce myself to all of you.  My English name is Tony.  I was born in 1998 . I live in Hangzhou, a very beautiful city.  I'm very healthy, because I often exercise. I go to school by bike with my friend Tom, it's only two kilometers from our home to school. Tom is my good friend, he's taller and quieter than me.  but I'm more outgoing.  In my free time.  I often play basketball with Tom. For food，I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I also drink milk. I hardly ever eat junk food I'm going to be a teacher when I grow up. For this reason， I'm going to work hard and. I feel lucky to join you. I hope that we can be good friends. That's all. Thank you!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱(chēng)，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: be glad to愿意做某事；be born出生；go to school去學(xué)校；grow up長(zhǎng)大等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。