My friend and I
My best friend, Linda, is the same age as me.
In some ways, we look the same, but in other ways, we look different. For instance, she is serious. However, I’m opposite,I’m outgoing.I like making a lot of friends.Linda likes sitcoms.Maybe that’s because of her personality.
As for me,I can’t stand action movies. I think they are too exciting.When watching them, I feel my heart nearly jumping out of my chest.When talking about future, she says she is going to be a teacher. And in order to achieve her dream,she is going to study hard to get good grade.But for me,I am going to be a reporter so I will read more
And keep on writing articles.
Although we have so many differences, I regard her as my closest sister, that’s because whenever I meet any difficulty, she’ll try her best to help me out. A the saying goes,”A friend in need is a friend indeed.” I know its real meaning from her—my best friend,Linda.
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，而且提供材料充分詳細。我們要做的就是用地道且完美的語句將這些內容表達出來。根據寫作的基本步驟，在認真詳細審題的審題之后。先在心中打好腹稿，確定本文的人稱，時態(tài)，要點，然后再動筆。在不遺漏要點的基礎上，適當加以發(fā)揮和選取精美的結構和語句。根據材料提供的內容可知，由于本文屬于一篇對比性較強的文章所以采取對比描寫的方式更能體現(xiàn)雙方的不同之處，更能為下文體現(xiàn)真正朋友做鋪墊。在寫作中作者注意了開頭和結尾的設計。不同事件之間應采用合適的連詞，保證文章渾然一體，可讀性強。
【亮點說明】這篇文章在開篇使用了同位語Linda及the same as結構，使文章開頭簡潔有力。在第二段又采用了In some ways, we look the same, but in other ways, we look different.承上啟下做的很好。For instance的使用使下文的介紹順暢自然。加之as for ，that’s because of, when doing ,in order to achieve her dream等等一系列結構的運用使文章可讀性強。When watching them, I feel my heart nearly jumping out of my chest.When talking about future, she says she is going to be a teacher. 兩句中When doing結構的運用，都直接體現(xiàn)了作者的組織運用語言的能力很強。而文章結尾一段朋友和我之間感情的升華，雖然我們有許多不同之處但我仍把她視為最親的朋友。因為無論何時何地有困難她都盡力幫助我，更體現(xiàn)作者在平時的日常學習中，十分注意總結和扎實基本功，這些對寫作都是至關重要的。
