Question

假如你是Jane, 你所在的學(xué)校每年在十月至十二月都會(huì)開展一系列的校園活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的時(shí)間表用英語給你的同學(xué)Peter寫一封信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下這些活動(dòng)。
作文要求：
1．不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2．注意時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣埂?br />3．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

活 動(dòng)(Activities)	日 期
英語節(jié)(English Day )	十月十九日
學(xué)校旅行(School trip)	十月二十八日
藝術(shù)節(jié)(art festival)	十一月一日
足球賽(soccer game)	十一月二十日
籃球賽(basketball game)	十二月二日
圖書特賣活動(dòng)(book sale)	十二月二十三日

Dear Peter,
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year.              
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Do you like these activities? Please join us!
Yours,
Jane

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year. October is a great month. The English Day is on October19 th. We must talk with our classmates in English at school. Our school trip is on October 28^th. I can play with my classmates! It’s really interesting! On November 1^st, we have an art festival. You like sports, right? The soccer game is on November 20^th, and the basketball game is on December 2^nd. We also have a book sale in our school library on Decemer 23^rd. You can buy many good books at very good prices. Do you like these activities? Please join us!
Yours,
Jane

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。同時(shí)注意書信的格式。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文的格式正確，并且將提供的信息全面而自然的展現(xiàn)出來，并不是簡(jiǎn)單的翻譯。在用詞方面更是恰當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確。用簡(jiǎn)單的語言將信息完整的傳達(dá)出來。一些短語運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。如：from……to, talk with, a book sale, join等等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.