Question

假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和來(lái)自英國(guó)的一位中學(xué)生Allen一起討論了一個(gè)話題：the ways to learn English better�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的觀點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給你的外籍老師Mr Nunan寫一篇關(guān)于這次討論的匯報(bào)材料。
注意：1．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好。
2．可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的話語(yǔ)，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫通順。
3．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格中他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。
5．詞數(shù)：90個(gè)左右。

Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. ___________________________________________________________
Liu Mei

Answer 1

Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain.In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimesseeing English films isn't a bad way.I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Best wishes.
Yours love
Liu Mei

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱和第三人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是我和Allen交流的學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法。文中使用了information，finally等較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯，而且還應(yīng)用了形容where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)learning English grammar做主語(yǔ)等結(jié)構(gòu)，為文章增色不少。全文連貫統(tǒng)一，具體表現(xiàn)在用“in his opinion”  “he also believes”  “however” “besides” “finally”等把全文連成了一個(gè)整體，使讀者在欣賞的同時(shí)感覺(jué)暢快，從而認(rèn)同作者的觀點(diǎn)。