Question

根據(jù)自己的一張家庭照片，以My Family為題，介紹你的家人,40詞左右。
                        My   Family                           
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 

Answer 1

This is a photo of my family．I have a happy family．There are five people in my family．They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and I．The old（年老的） woman is my grandmother．The man is my father．His name is David．He is a teacher．And what about the woman? She is my mother．Her name is Linda．She is very nice．Look at the girl．That’s my sister．She is in a middle school（中學）．Her name is Lucy．
Do you know the boy? It’s me

試題分析：本文是學生熟悉的話題，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必須認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，介紹自己家人的情況應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。注意敘述的條理性，適當使用連接詞。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些短語，在敘述中使用了連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: is from +地點。來自哪里，very much 非常等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。