Question

根據(jù)自己的一張家庭照片，以My Family為題，介紹你的家人,40詞左右。
                        My   Family                           
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 

Answer 1

This is a photo of my family．I have a happy family．There are five people in my family．They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and I．The old（年老的） woman is my grandmother．The man is my father．His name is David．He is a teacher．And what about the woman? She is my mother．Her name is Linda．She is very nice．Look at the girl．That’s my sister．She is in a middle school（中學(xué)）．Her name is Lucy．
Do you know the boy? It’s me

試題分析：本文是學(xué)生熟悉的話題，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，介紹自己家人的情況應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意敘述的條理性，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些短語(yǔ)，在敘述中使用了連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: is from +地點(diǎn)。來(lái)自哪里，very much 非常等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。