Question

書面表達(dá)  (本大題共10分)
1. 失明影響全世界約數(shù)百萬(wàn)人。過(guò)去很多病人沒(méi)錢進(jìn)行治療。
2. ORBIS幫助有眼疾的人。它使用飛行眼科醫(yī)院訪問(wèn)貧窮國(guó)家，
3. 到現(xiàn)在為止，已有很多當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)生和護(hù)士在飛行眼科醫(yī)院學(xué)習(xí)了眼科手術(shù)，了解到了新的技術(shù)和知識(shí)。
4. 大多數(shù)眼科問(wèn)題都能被現(xiàn)代醫(yī)學(xué)治愈。ORBIS醫(yī)生們對(duì)幫助他們感到很自豪。
5. 我們希望……
要求: 1.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)；
2.條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；
3.第5點(diǎn)用2-3句話進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。
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Answer 1

Blindness affects millions of people around the world.In the past, many patients have no money for treatment. ORBIS is an international charity that helps people with eye problems. Most eye problems can be cured or prevented. But many patients are so poor that they can’t afford to go to hospital. So the ORBIS doctors use a flying eye hospital to help them. They do operations on the plane. The plane is also used as teaching centre, the ORBIS doctors can teach local doctors and nurses new skills and knowledge.  Many people are very grateful to ORBIS. I think we can support their work by sending donations to them.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問(wèn)題。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: millions of成千上萬(wàn)的；so……that如此……以至于等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。