Question

作為一名中學(xué)生，在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎樣做才能保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請根據(jù)下面的提示，以How to protect our environment? 為主題，寫一篇70詞左右的短文。
1. 禁止亂扔垃圾。
2. 盡量步行或騎自行車。
3. 節(jié)約用水和電。節(jié)省文具用品，杜絕浪費(fèi)。
4. 應(yīng)該盡量使用可再利用杯和紙盒，這樣就能大大減少垃圾的產(chǎn)生。
5. 要愛護(hù)花草樹木，并且積極參加綠化植樹活動。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
As a student, what can we do to protect our environment? Well, we can’t throw rubbish here and there. If possible, we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car, because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution. Don’t waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things. Always use reusable cups, lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste. Also, we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees. I believe if everyone protects our environment, it will become better.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目和材料已經(jīng)給出。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。我們在寫作中要注意認(rèn)真審題，正確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，多注意句式以及一些基本詞匯及詞組的應(yīng)用。注意表達(dá)的條理性，連貫性，恰當(dāng)應(yīng)用連詞。注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，寫作中一定要使用自己有把握的句式單詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car，we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees.As a student等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。