Question

在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你一定得到過(guò)很多人的幫助和關(guān)愛(ài)，你一定有很多話要說(shuō)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.感謝的人：親人、老師、同學(xué)……   2.對(duì)他們的美好祝福。 要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所提示，不能提及真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)、老師或同學(xué)名。  2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。  3.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now , I want to express my thanks to them. First,
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
（In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, ) I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. When I have problems in my studies, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble.. I will never forget the days when we play and study together.
Thank you very much, my parents , my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: I want to thank my parents. hey make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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