Question

假如這幅漫畫(huà)表現(xiàn)的是你所經(jīng)歷的事情，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示描述事情經(jīng)過(guò)并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />
提示詞：jaywalk v/.亂穿馬路；run the red light闖紅燈
注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名。詞數(shù)80-100。
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Answer 1

Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home from school, I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing. A volunteer tried-to stop them, but no one listened to him Instead, they ran the red light quickly. Just then, a bus came. One of them was nearly hit by the running bus.
In my opinion, jaywalking is a bad habit. It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger. I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light.  Look both sides / ways when you cross the road

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。由于是描述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，故用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)要求用第一人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文層次分明，語(yǔ)言流暢，能把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。In my opinion,，not only…but also等的應(yīng)用給短文增色不少。