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Jenny 是一名《Heart To Heart》電臺主持人，深受同學(xué)們的喜愛，被大家稱呼為知心姐姐。昨天，中考第一天后，她接到一名九年級李湖同學(xué)的熱線電話，李湖向Jenny訴說了很多苦惱。假如你是Jenny, 請給李湖同學(xué)提出一些合理的建議。

Li Hu’s problems	Jenny’s suggestions
英語學(xué)習有困難，心里焦慮，害怕明天的英語考試失敗。	學(xué)會自信，坦然面對考試失敗，為下一個挑戰(zhàn)做好準備。
習慣了初中生活，對老師和同學(xué)很留戀，但上高中后不知怎樣和新同學(xué)相處。	真誠的對待每一個人，不要封閉自己，與老師和同學(xué)分享煩惱和快樂。
考試完后很糾結(jié)，想去度假放松自己，但是又想準備高中的課程。	適度放松去旅游和參加運動，但也要復(fù)習初中弱勢學(xué)科為高中的課程學(xué)習做準備。

要求：1、圍繞以上表格內(nèi)容進行合理表述；
2、所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的所有方面；
3、不少于80詞,開頭語和結(jié)束語已給出 (不計入詞數(shù))。
提示詞匯：fail, confident, smile at, be used to, senior high school, in my opinion, close mind, open one’s heart, share, advice, travel, spend, prepare for
Dear Li Hu,
Thanks for telling me about your problems! It is true that every student is very nervous before a test. As you say, you are worried about tomorrow’s English test________________________________
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Wish you good luck! Wish you happy every day!
Yours sincerely,
Jenny

Answer 1

A possible version: (參考范文)
Dear Li Hu,
Thanks for telling me about your problems! It is true that every student is very nervous before a test. As you say, you are worried about tomorrow’s English test because you are not good at English and are afraid of failing the test. Be more confident, then you will smile at any problem. Get ready for the next challenge, though you might fail the exam. You have been used to the life now. However, you don’t know how to get on with the new teachers and classmates in the senior high school. In my opinion, don’t close your mind! Open your heart to everyone and try to be friendly to them. If you do so, you will share your happiness with them. As for your plan, I think it’s good for you to go traveling and do some sports. But don’t forget to spend more time on your poor subjects to prepare for your new study.
Wish you good luck! Wish you happy every day!
Yours sincerely,
Jenny

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹給李湖提建議的的文章，題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前要根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱。確定句子的時態(tài)。關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，要適當表達自己觀點。寫作中要注意語意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連詞。
【亮點說明】文中多次使用主從復(fù)合句如：①Get ready for the next challenge, though you might fail the exam.② If you do so, you will share your happiness with them ③As for your plan, I think it’s good for you to go traveling and do some sports.為文章增色不少。