Question

假如你是李華，3月18日你校舉行了“科技節(jié)”展示活動，請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給你的筆友Mike寫一封郵件，介紹本次活動的情況。詞數(shù)：90-100詞。

活動目的	提高實踐技能、培養(yǎng)團隊精神
活動準備	學生們結(jié)成小組、選擇活動項目、進行實驗研究
展示內(nèi)容	1. 從高處扔雞蛋，雞蛋仍完好無損；2. 紙做的橋上能站人；3. ……
活動感受	……

Dear Mike,
In your last e-mail, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you about it.________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mike,
In your last e-mail, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you about it.
The goal of this activity was to improve students’ practice skills and develop team spirit. At the beginning of the festival, we got ready for it. We formed groups, chose programs and then began doing research and experiments. Finally it was time to show the amazing results. For example, the egg was thrown from high places, but it wasn’t broken and was still complete. People could stand on the bridge made of paper. Some students even made a robot to do their homework.
From the activity, I realized the importance of team work and was amazed by the charm of science and technology. I found my new interest in science.
I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的時態(tài)，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹避免事物浪費。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如it was time to show the amazing result，Some students even made a robot to do their homework.，I realized the importance of team work and was amazed by the charm of science and technology. I found my new interest in science..等。From the activity.等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。