Question

朋友會(huì)給你帶來歡樂、朋友能解除你學(xué)習(xí)生活的煩惱，真正的朋友是患難與共。你的朋友如何呢？請(qǐng)你以“My Good Friend”為題寫一篇英語短文。
要求：1、語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名；

My Good Friend

Answer 1

One possible version：
My Good Friend
I have many friends, but my good friend is LiHua.  She is 14 years old now and she is a smart and healthy girl. She is fond of running and she never eats junk food. She is interested in playing volleyball, so we often play it together. She shares happiness and sadness with me. She has a wonderful memory, and she can remember all the things that we have experienced. She always encourages me to work hard.
She is my good friend, and I hope we will keep in touch with each other. 

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She is……；she never eats……；She shares……及she can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己要和好友保持聯(lián)系的愿望。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹朋友的特點(diǎn)和喜好，最后希望我們要保持聯(lián)系。此處用了is fond of，is interested in，has a wonderful memory, encourages me to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。