Question

衛(wèi)生健康飲食：健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為題的主題班會(huì)，請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑢懸黄?0字左右的演講槁。
（1）保持健康的重要性（2）保持健康的方法（3）保持健康的結(jié)論
（4） （你的看法？）1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強(qiáng)體;3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣
                                                                             
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

Dear boys and girls：
I’m talking about how to keep health/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise， eat more junk food， and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit， my advices are as
follow：
Firstly， we must keep taking exercises every day ， and eat lots of fruit and vegetables 。 Secondly， try to sleep for about 8 hours a night， and remember to “early to bed early to rise”。 Finally， stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品。 Besides（除此之外）， don’t forget to breathe （呼吸）the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.
That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹保持健康的重要性和方法并得出結(jié)論。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵詞匯等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。寫作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了合適的連詞而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如Firstly ，Secondly ，F(xiàn)inally， Besides，等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。