Question

書面表達(dá)(滿分30分)
中美中學(xué)生交流項(xiàng)目安排一批美國(guó)中學(xué)生來(lái)華一周體驗(yàn)中國(guó)文化，在網(wǎng)上挑選適合住宿的家庭（homestay family）。假如你是北侖中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，愿意接受一位美國(guó)學(xué)生入住你家，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給項(xiàng)目美方負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封郵件，說明你的家庭和住宿條件，你本人的優(yōu)勢(shì)以及你幫助美國(guó)中學(xué)生體驗(yàn)中國(guó)文化的打算。
注意：
1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2．詞數(shù)：100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
Dear sir,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the Americanstudents.____________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear sir,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.
My parents are in favor of my idea that I host an American student. We live in a beautiful community. Luckily, we have extra room for guests so that they can have private living space. I am a student of Xinhua high school, open-minded and enthusiastic. What’s more, I’m quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.
If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area. Besides, My parents and I will help her to make Chinese meals, such as jiaozi, noodles, and other foods.
We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.
Looking forward to your reply.          
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。這是封申請(qǐng)信，愿意接受一位美國(guó)學(xué)生入住你家，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area.使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，象what’s more和besides等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。