Question

假如你是校報負責人, 急需在學校內聘一位同學任英文版的編輯, 請你用英文以 “An English Editor Wanted” 為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內容要點如下：
1、該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學生的文章； 二是選擇與編輯同學們的來稿。
2、希望該同學滿足下列要求：
1）樂意奉獻出一些業(yè)余時間為同學們服務；
2）英文與美術皆好； 能熟練使用電腦。
3）感興趣的同學請在本周內與學生會（Students’ Union）聯(lián)系。
注 意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 不要逐字翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。
 
 
 

Answer 1

An English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students. The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, it’s necessary for him/ her to be good at both English and fine art. Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.
The Students’ Union

試題分析：考查應用文的寫作。要求描述廣告里的內容要點都已經(jīng)給出，要點包括：工作范圍，招聘要求，鼓勵學生參加等，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還需要自己組織語言，注意分段，不能一片到頭只有一段。注意控制字數(shù)，盡量使用復合句和高級詞匯。
【亮點說明】文章語言簡練，通俗易懂。文中多使用簡單句，使文章顯得簡潔明了，符合啟示、通知類文體對語言的要求。文中one…，the other；first、 second等表順序的連接詞也使文章層次分明，條理清楚，顯示了作者思路的清晰。高級詞匯Needless to say和經(jīng)典定語從句Those who are interested in the job的出現(xiàn)給樸素的語言增添了一抹亮麗的色彩