Question

Despite the promising publishing industry in China today, many Chinese people spend little time reading. Some of them read just to kill time or prepare for the tests rather than enjoy the reading itself.
As far as I am concerned , Chinese people don’t read as much as they used to for the following reasons. For one thing, people have too much going on in their mind as China is now experiencing great changes, so it has become difficult for them to enjoy reading quietly; for another, with heavy work load, people in China only read when they need something for practical use or something relaxing to keep them away from working pressure.
Personally, reading is of great significance in life. It not only provides a source of satisfaction and pleasure, but also serves as a means to seek information and to acquire, develop and apply knowledge. Besides, people can read to enhance language proficiency and to broaden life experience as well.
I myself have improved English a lot through reading. At the beginning, I thought it difficult to read English novels but gradually, my language proficiency was enhanced before I realized it. Personally, it will make a great difference by reading.
【寫作內容】
以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容.
然后以約120個詞就“閱讀的意義”這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點：
你認為現(xiàn)在中國人不如以前喜歡閱讀的原因是什么？
你覺得閱讀重要嗎？為什么？
以你或他人的經歷舉例論證你的觀點。
【寫作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Despite the promising publishing industry in China today, many Chinese people spend little time reading. Some of them read just to kill time or prepare for the tests rather than enjoy the reading itself.
As far as I am concerned , Chinese people don’t read as much as they used to for the following reasons. For one thing, people have too much going on in their mind as China is now experiencing great changes, so it has become difficult for them to enjoy reading quietly; for another, with heavy work load, people in China only read when they need something for practical use or something relaxing to keep them away from working pressure.
Personally, reading is of great significance in life. It not only provides a source of satisfaction and pleasure, but also serves as a means to seek information and to acquire, develop and apply knowledge. Besides, people can read to enhance language proficiency and to broaden life experience as well.
I myself have improved English a lot through reading. At the beginning, I thought it difficult to read English novels but gradually, my language proficiency was enhanced before I realized it. Personally, it will make a great difference by reading.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】范文概括精當，觀點明確，不乏好的詞組和句子，如：kill time消磨時間； prepare for準備，As far as I am concerned就我而言，F(xiàn)or one thing … for another …一方面 …… 另一方面 ……，be of great significance對……很有意義，make a great difference有很大意義；for another, with heavy work load, people in China only read when they need something for practical use or something relaxing to keep them away from working pressure.這句話用了非謂語動詞，At the beginning, I thought it difficult to read English novels but gradually, my language proficiency was enhanced before I realized it.這句話用了it作形式賓語。