Question

假定你是李津。作為高～新生，你升入耀華中學后已經在這里學習和生活了近一個學期，對各個方面都有所感觸�，F(xiàn)請你用英文給在Australia的一位筆友Tracy寫一封信，分享以下幾點內容：
1.學校是當?shù)貎?yōu)秀學校。校園美麗，學習環(huán)境優(yōu)良，社團多樣，活動眾多；
2.同學學習勤奮，互助友愛；
3．教師工作認真負責，……（其他方面如對待學生等）；
4．目前的困難……；
5.今后一段時期的目標和構想。
注意：l．詞數(shù)不少于100:
2．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總次數(shù)；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Tracy,
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How are you getting on? Please write back as soon  as possible.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Tracy,
How are you recently? I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.
Our school is an ideal place to live and study in. There are beautiful pants, and nice flowers. Moreover , we have a variety of societies to choose and activities to join in.
I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other. Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work.
At present, however, I am not doing well in maths. And there is still some time before I can be really independent. But I have talked it with my teacher and I will try my best to catch up with others and learn to live by myself in the future.
How are you getting on? Please write back as soon as possible.
Best wishes.                                            
Sincrerly yours,
Li Jin

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假定你是李津。作為高～新生，你升入耀華中學后已經在這里學習和生活了近一個學期，對各個方面都有所感觸�，F(xiàn)請你用英文給在Australia的一位筆友Tracy寫一封信，分享以下幾點內容： 1.學校是當?shù)貎?yōu)秀學校。校園美麗，學習環(huán)境優(yōu)良，社團多樣，活動眾多；2.同學學習勤奮，互助友愛；3．教師工作認真負責，……（其他方面如對待學生等）；4．目前的困難……；5.今后一段時期的目標和構想。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句；I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other.這里含有一個定語從句；Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work. 這里含有一個定語從句。