Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
最近的一份調(diào)查表明中國(guó)青少年的體質(zhì)明顯下降，青少年的健康問題日益受到社會(huì)的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，以“The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern”為題，寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文。
1．現(xiàn)狀：青少年體質(zhì)明顯下降，有許多諸如肥胖、近視等健康問題；
2．原因：作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過重，睡眠不足，缺乏鍛煉；
3．建議：改革現(xiàn)行教育制度，減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)，使學(xué)生有更多睡眠和鍛煉的時(shí)間。
參考詞匯：肥胖 obesity 近視short-sightedness 改革 reform

Answer 1

The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern
As a latest survey shows , the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined．Many Chinese students are facing a number of physical problems, such as obesity, and short-sightedness, etc．How has this situation come about?
Under the current educational system, marks seem to mean everything to students．To pass the college entrance examination, students have to spend most of their time in doing endless homework．As a result, they do not sleep or exercise enough．
To improve students’ health, we should reform the current educational system．Besides, we call for less homework, thus leaving students more time to sleep and take exercise．Only in this way can the health of youngsters be greatly improved．

本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為中國(guó)青少年的健康極其令人擔(dān)心，具體內(nèi)容包括中國(guó)青少年健康的現(xiàn)狀體質(zhì)明顯下降，有許多諸如肥胖、近視等健康問題；產(chǎn)生這種健康問題的原因，如作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過重，睡眠不足，缺乏鍛煉；以及個(gè)人所提出的建議為改革現(xiàn)行教育制度，減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)，使學(xué)生有更多睡眠和鍛煉的時(shí)間。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)符合題意，同時(shí)應(yīng)注重語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。