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假如你叫李華，是惠州的一名中學(xué)生。最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府正在�?shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫一封信，反映這一情況。

贊成觀點(diǎn)	反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)
1．能夠解決交通問題，方便人民生活； 2．有助于發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，提高人民生活水平； 3．有助于提高惠州作為現(xiàn)代化旅游城市的形象。	1．會(huì)造成環(huán)境污染； 2．會(huì)產(chǎn)生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活； 3．時(shí)常造成交通堵塞。

[寫作要求]
1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和學(xué)生姓名。
3．短文開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入5個(gè)句子中。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
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參考詞匯：快速公交系統(tǒng)BRT 高架橋overpass
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.
                                                                                              
                                                                                              
                                                                                              
                                                                                              
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.
Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.
But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.
2、Editor,
I’m writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.
Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.
But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people’s peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.

這是一篇要點(diǎn)作文，是一封書信，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，和其它作文不一樣的是，要學(xué)生寫五句話這就需要學(xué)生有很強(qiáng)的概括能力，用精確的語言對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行歸納。不能繁瑣，還要求句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，這時(shí)我們可以盡量使用復(fù)雜句，這樣一句話里還有的信息量可以很大，如it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.還有可以加入一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。