Question

高三年級(jí)是高中生活的最后一年，在這一年中，學(xué)生們要面臨著沉重的升學(xué)壓力。因此，很多學(xué)生下課后也坐在教室里用功，但學(xué)習(xí)效率和成績(jī)并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾��，F(xiàn)在就請(qǐng)你以“A Ten - minute Break”為主題，按下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，讓這些同學(xué)從中有所啟發(fā)。短文的要點(diǎn)如下：

    1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。

    2．要注意適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒎绞健?/p>

    3．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

    注意：①開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；②字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。

A Ten - minute Break

    As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited.                          

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A Ten –minute Break

  As a Senior Three students, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break.

  In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

   My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. when the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

  Experience tells me that making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, but we all know people who can’t find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。高三年級(jí)是高中生活的最后一年，在這一年中，學(xué)生們要面臨著沉重的升學(xué)壓力。因此，很多學(xué)生下課后也坐在教室里用功，但學(xué)習(xí)效率和成績(jī)并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾��，F(xiàn)在就請(qǐng)你以“A Ten - minute Break”為主題，按下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，讓這些同學(xué)從中有所啟發(fā)。短文的要點(diǎn)如下： 1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。2．要注意適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒎绞健?．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired.這里含有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句。Experience tells me that making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, but we all know people who can’t find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句

考點(diǎn)：話題類作文