Question

高三年級是高中生活的最后一年， 這一年中，學生們面臨著沉重的升學壓力。因此，很多學生課間也坐教室里用功，但學習效率和成績并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾�。現(xiàn)在就請你以“A Ten-minute Break”為題，按下列要點寫一篇短文，讓這些同學從中有所啟發(fā)。要點如下：

1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。

2．要注意適當?shù)男菹⒎绞健?/p>

3．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

注意：①開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)；②詞數(shù)100左右。

A Ten-minute Break

       As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited.

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Answer 1

A Ten-minute Break

    As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

       During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

       My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

解析:

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