Question

假設你將作為光明中學高三畢業(yè)生代表，請根據(jù)以下要點在畢業(yè)晚會上用英文作一個告別演講:
1.感謝家人，朋友和老師。特別舉例感謝某個老師（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Wang, 并寫出原因。
2.回顧高中三年的生活。列舉出你印象深刻的活動。3. 展望未來。
注意：開頭與結尾已經(jīng)給出，所寫部分120字左右。
Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Guangming High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014!
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Answer 1

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Guangming High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014! First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through English when I had given up hope. Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.
However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “Attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.
Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2014. Thank you very much.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假設你將作為光明中學高三畢業(yè)生代表，請根據(jù)以下要點在畢業(yè)晚會上用英文作一個告別演講:1.感謝家人，朋友和老師。特別舉例感謝某個老師（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Wang, 并寫出原因。2.回顧高中三年的生活。列舉出你印象深刻的活動。3. 展望未來。需要寫的內容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years.這里含有一個定語從句。