Question

生活中人們常常需要做出決定，一些決定會對其產生重大影響，請敘述你曾經做出的一個對你產生重大影響的決定，并簡要說明你的啟示或感受，用英文寫一篇100－120個詞的短文。
注意：開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。
In life people make many important decisions．                                            
                                                                                        
                                                                                           
                  

Answer 1

In life people make many important decisions。Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.
My latest decision was made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class. Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and put down some important notes. But I was never a good listener. I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me. She made me realize the importance of not taking. Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class. Since then, my English has improved greatly .
From this experience , I have realized a good decision benefits people. We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見的短語be good at擅長做某事； put down 放下；have a talk with sb 與某人交談；decide to do決定做某事； take notes做筆記。take advice采取建議；I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me.這個句子中ignorew做伴隨狀語，until表示直到。。。Since then, my English has improved greatly 這個句子用了典型的since then，現(xiàn)在完成時。We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.這個句子中l(wèi)earn 與 do 是并列謂語動詞。