Question

你們學校很多同學想出國讀書，他們認為國外的條件無論如何都比國內(nèi)好。你卻持有與他們不同的觀點，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容談談中學生出國讀書的利與弊。文章開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

同學的觀點	你的觀點
國外有較好的設備（facilities）和教學方法，跟外國學生交流可獲益匪淺，在國外學習歸來的人回國后肯定比國內(nèi)的優(yōu)秀。	很多出國的學生發(fā)現(xiàn)國外現(xiàn)實環(huán)境和理想其實相去甚遠，更不用說獲得成功了。國外生活很孤單無助，遇到問題無人幫忙。

【寫作要求】：
1. 只能使用五個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；
2. 文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
評分標準：句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確, 信息內(nèi)容完整, 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
According to a new survey, an increasing number of high school students in China choose to study abroad. And some students in my school think studying abroad is a better choice for them.
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Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual.

Answer 1

  
One possible version：
According to a new survey, an increasing number of high school students in China choose to study abroad. And some students in my school think studying abroad is a better choice for them. They hold the view that there are usually better facilities and teaching methods in foreign schools. In addition, by communicating with foreign students or spending a long time with them, they can get valuable experience. What’s more, by the time they come back home, they are supposed to have a great advantage over the students at home in many ways.
I quite agree with what they say, but one fact I’d like to remind them of is that quite a number of overseas students staying abroad feel disappointed as they can’t obtain what they hope for, let alone success. Furthermore, when they are abroad, they are lonely, helpless and have to be independent, which is quite contrary to what it is at home.
Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual.

試題分析：本篇書面表達是對比不同觀點的文章，這種作文的寫作模式為：首先提出討論的話題，（在本文中已經(jīng)給出），然后分別介紹所列出的幾種觀點，介紹時可以分幾個層次解釋每種觀點的理由。最后進行概括總結(jié)。寫作時注意寫作要求是只能使用五個句子表達全部內(nèi)容，所以盡量使用涵蓋信息量大的長句并且注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準確性，此外還不要遺漏要點，最后文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面、層次清晰。文章分兩段分別講述了對于去國外學習的兩種不同的觀點，而且分別陳述了各自認為的利與弊。在文中作者使用in addition、what’s more、furthermore等連接性詞語，使文章層次清晰，上下內(nèi)容銜接緊湊。在句式上作者使用五個長句，如名詞性從句They hold the view that there are usually better facilities and teaching methods in foreign schools.，狀語從句by the time they come back home,， 定語從句which is quite contrary to what it is at home.等多種句式，這些都顯示了作者對語言很強的駕馭能力。