Question

臨近期末，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見。假如你叫李紅，請根據(jù)以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達(dá)你們的需求和建議。
●適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考時間
●反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯知識點(diǎn)
●指導(dǎo)方法
●減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量
●給予更多鼓勵
注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；
3. 詞數(shù)：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。
Dear Miss. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
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Answer 1

Dear Miss .Wang, 
We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views. 
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn't learn well enough in the first few weeks, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently. 
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time. 
Yours sincerely,
LiHong

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。