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隨著私家車的普及，城市的交通堵塞越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。最近，本市正在考慮學(xué)習(xí)倫敦和新加坡的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，對(duì)城區(qū)的私家車輛另外收取一定的交通堵塞費(fèi)用（a congestion fee），請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下討論的情況，寫篇短文。
注意：詞數(shù)：100一120，文章的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

贊成	反對(duì)	我的看法（至少2點(diǎn)）
1.減少污染 2.緩解交通壓力 3.所收費(fèi)用可用于改善公共交通設(shè)施	1.車主已經(jīng)支付了太多的費(fèi)用 2.對(duì)市中心的商業(yè)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展不利，因?yàn)橘?gòu)物者不去市中心了	…

 
With the development of our society, more and more private cars stream onto the road，which brings a big problem to our city. So shall we charge the car drivers a congestion fee?
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                            

Answer 1

With the development of our society, more and more private cars stream onto the road, which brings a big problem to our city. So shall the car drivers be charged congestion fee?
Some think it’s necessary to change the driver．It will be an effective way to control the number of private cars，which creates the traffic jams and air pollution we all suffer from．If they don't want to pay, they can take public transport instead．What's more, the money raised by the charge can be used to improve public transportation．
However, others are against it, They hold the view that people drive because they have to, for various reasons, And they have paid a lot for their cars: higher oil price, taxes, fees .The government should try to find another way to solve the problem , Besides, The congestion charging will damage the economy as shoppers may desert centers, As a result lots of money will be lost.
In my opinion , It will be an unfair burden for car-owners who already pay various taxes and fees, But I do hope the government can improve the public transportation first, if they found it convenient to go out with the help of public transportation they will surely have a better choice.

試題分析：這是一篇議論文，題材是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。主題是關(guān)于對(duì)城區(qū)的私家車輛另外收取一定的交通堵塞費(fèi)用這一話題的討論，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
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