Question

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假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Helen將要來到你校參加為期一個(gè)月的中文學(xué)習(xí)并入住寄宿家庭。請(qǐng)寫信幫助她了解中國(guó)的社交規(guī)則，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給他寫一封電子郵件。
1.  見到主人時(shí)要跟他握手，并問候他的家人;
2.  在閑聊時(shí)，要注意準(zhǔn)備好話題及開場(chǎng)白，避免過多眼神接觸等；
3.  收到禮物以及贊美的話如何回應(yīng)；
4.  其他建議......（至少兩點(diǎn)）
寫作要求：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。
Dear Helen,
Hi! How is everything going on with you? I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school and live in a host family. __________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Helen,
Hi! How is everything going on with you? I’m glad to hear that you are coming to our school and live in a host family. I’m writing this letter to share with you some tips of social communication.
Firstly, remember to shake hands with your host and hostess on your arrival. You’d better greet their family warmly as well. Secondly, it’s important to do a little advance planning if you are going to do some small talk. Have some topics and conversation openers ready. To gaze intently may show your attentiveness, but is not that necessary. The best way is to avoid too much eye contact. Thirdly, if you receive some compliments or gifts from the host, a simple expression of “Thank you” will do. While at dinner, we usually wait for the elders to sit and eat first and don’t forget to take your chance to praise the host for the good cooking.
I hope these ideas will be of great help to you. Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)寄宿家庭。幫助Helen了解中國(guó)的社交規(guī)則。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點(diǎn)比較全，要球表達(dá)清楚并給出你的建議，要求在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展，豐富文章內(nèi)容，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的While at dinner, we usually wait for the elders to sit and eat first and don’t forget to take your chance to praise the host for the good cooking.使用了狀語從句的省略,還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。