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假如你叫李華，你的筆友Catherine 給你寫信，詢問如何保持健康。請你給她回信，就此提一些建議。
內(nèi)容包括：1. 注意合理飲食。多吃魚、肉等，特別是新鮮蔬菜和水果，少吃甜食。
2. 注意鍛煉身體。多參加體育活動(dòng)，如跑步、游泳、打乒乓球等。
3. 保證充足的睡眠。每天睡眠不少于8小時(shí)。
注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右    2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

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Dear Catherine,
In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
As you know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat and beans, especially fresh vegetables and fruits. You’d better not eat much sweet food. Besides, you should have sports every day instead of studying in the classroom all day long. For example, you can do some running, swimming or play ping-pong after school. What’s more, having enough sleep is very important. So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文為提綱式的作文，所選內(nèi)容與我們的生活相關(guān)，又是考生比較熟悉的書信格式，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯，注意使用一些過渡句或過渡詞來使句子讀起來流暢。但是要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)檫@封信是給出對方一些建議，還要注意寫作時(shí)的語氣要客氣，謙虛。
點(diǎn)評：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。