Question

下圖是刊載于某報(bào)紙的一幅幔畫(huà)。請(qǐng)描述幔畫(huà)所反映的問(wèn)題，分析產(chǎn)生這些現(xiàn)象的成因并提出解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的對(duì)策。
（注意：圖中人物前的英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明：左1：Primary School Student 中：Middle School Student右1：College Student）

注意：
1．分析產(chǎn)生這些現(xiàn)象的成因和對(duì)策需自己想象。
2．詞數(shù)：120 左右。
3．參考詞匯：昏暗的-dim
4．文章的第一句話已為你寫(xiě)好。
When Xiao Ming was a primary school student, he had to                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                

Answer 1

When Xiao Ming was a primary school student, he had to wear glasses. Now he is a college student. As time goes on, he is becoming more and more near-sighted. The more he reads, the thicker his glasses are. As far as I know, more and more students have poor eyesight in China.
Why do so many students have to wear glasses? Sometimes they read in the strong sunlight and sometimes they read where the light is too dim. Some watch TV too much. Some even have a bad habit of reading in bed. As a result, their eyesight becomes poorer and poorer .
I think students should know the importance of protecting their eyes. They should read in good light. Look far into the sky or just go out after reading some time. In a word , we should relax our eyes as often as possible.

試題分析：本題是比較常見(jiàn)的漫畫(huà)類作文，漫畫(huà)清晰明了，一目了然，學(xué)生不難下筆。注意，要按照要求作答，分析現(xiàn)象的原因，并提出解決的策略。字?jǐn)?shù)方面，不要超過(guò)120個(gè)字。作文時(shí)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，書(shū)寫(xiě)要有條理，可以使用一些比較好的短語(yǔ)和句子，增加亮點(diǎn)。注意上下文的連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文層次分明，共分為三段，第一段介紹現(xiàn)象，第二段分析原因，第三段提出解決策略。范文使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)When；Now；As time goes on等表先后關(guān)系，使段落銜接緊密。還使用了一些短語(yǔ)As far as I know；As a result等，還使用了從句where the light is too dim，說(shuō)明語(yǔ)法知識(shí)很牢固。