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假設(shè)你是李華，你校英語報將舉行“What would happen without computers in the life?”為主題的英語征文比賽。請發(fā)揮你的想象寫一篇120—150詞的英語短文參賽。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

As we all know, computers are playing a very important role in our life nowadays. If there were no computers, our life would become quite inconvenient. Firstly, we can’t communicate with our friends or family fast and conveniently by sending e-mails or chatting online. Secondly, we wouldn’t learn what is happening at home and abroad in the quickest way through the Internet. Thirdly, when we feel tired or bored in daily life, we couldn’t download the music, movies or plays and relax ourselves by enjoying them. It would be a terrible thing, especially for those who have been accustomed to the life with a computer, it would be much more difficult for scientists to work out some advanced problems, which will no doubt hold back the development of science and technology.
In conclusion, so significant are computers to us that we can’t live well without them.

這篇作文讓學(xué)生寫一篇120—150詞的英語短文，題目是“What would happen without computers in the life?”那么在寫作時就要圍繞這個話題展開，題目中沒有其它的提示，要求學(xué)生能發(fā)揮自己的想象力。首先說明自己的觀點：If there were no computers, our life would become quite inconvenient.如果沒有電腦，我們是的生活會很不方便，要用虛擬語氣。然后列出理由，文章里有三個理由:Firstly, we can’t communicate with our friends or family fast and conveniently by sending e-mails or chatting online. Secondly, we wouldn’t learn what is happening at home and abroad in the quickest way through the Internet. Thirdly, when we feel tired or bored in daily life, we couldn’t download the music, movies or plays and relax ourselves by enjoying them.這些劃線的短語都是亮點，接下來文章寫了對哪些人而言，沒有電腦不方便，It would be a terrible thing, especially for those who have been accustomed to the life with a computer, it would be much more difficult for scientists to work out some advanced problems, which will no doubt hold back the development of science and technology.，這兩句劃線的句子都是定語從句。
最后一段是總結(jié), In conclusion, so significant are computers to us that we can’t live well without them.這句話中倒裝句的用法很值得學(xué)習(xí)。