Question

眾所周知， 環(huán)境與我們每個(gè)人息息相關(guān)。而隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，環(huán)境污染卻越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，以“How to Protect the Environment” 為題，用英文寫(xiě)一篇120--150字的短文。
現(xiàn)狀： 全球氣候變暖，極端氣候頻發(fā)；空氣、水污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)。
治理措施：1）提高人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)（awareness）。
2）制定環(huán)保法律，違者嚴(yán)懲。
3）你的建議：（至少兩條）
要求：1. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔（卷面分1--3分）。
How to Protect the Environment
                                                                                   
                                                                             

Answer 1

How to Protect the Environment
As we all know, the environment is closely connected with our life. However, with the development of our society, environment pollution is becoming more and more serious. We can see waste thrown everywhere and we have to breathe in polluted air and drink polluted water . What’ more, because of pollution, global warming increases and extreme weather happens frequently. All this has a bad effect on our life and health. So it’s high time we took effective measures to protect the environment.
Firstly, we mast raise people’s awareness of environment protection and educate people not to throw rubbish everywhere. Secondly, the government should make laws about protecting environment and punish those breaking the law severely. In addition, I think we can plant more trees, grass and flowers to refresh the air around us. We should also save resources and avoid wasting.
All in all, let’s join together to protect our environment.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)As we all know 眾所周知；What’ more 而且；has a bad effect on對(duì)。。有壞的影響； In addition 此外；All in all總而言之。So it’s high time we took effective measures to protect the environment.這個(gè)句子中考查it is high time that 一般過(guò)去時(shí)或should do，其中should不可省略，典型的虛擬語(yǔ)氣。Firstly, we mast raise people’s awareness of environment protection and educate people not to throw rubbish everywhere.這個(gè)句子中raise one’s awareness,提到。。意識(shí)，not to do 不要做某事，表達(dá)目的。