Question

假如你叫李華，你有一位叫Smith的美國(guó)朋友，他想來(lái)中國(guó)任教。剛好你校打算聘請(qǐng)一名外教，請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校給他寫(xiě)封邀請(qǐng)信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 每周工作量;  2. 學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)水平;   3. 教學(xué)內(nèi)容;
4. 擔(dān)任學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部和校報(bào)顧問(wèn)（advisor）。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;   2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
                                                                                
                                                                               
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any questions, I’d be more than happy to help.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school happens to be looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior students. If you would like to come, you can choose three of the following courses. Speaking, Writing, Listening. You need to teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take the courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides, you will also work as an advisor for the students English club and our school’s English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any questions, I’d be more than happy to help.
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封書(shū)信，請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校給你美國(guó)朋友sam寫(xiě)封邀請(qǐng)信,邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)學(xué)校任教。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生發(fā)揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時(shí)注意使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。同時(shí)要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. 這句話有賓語(yǔ)從句，Our school happens to be looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior students.這句話用不定式做定語(yǔ)， If you would like to come, you can choose three of the following courses. Speaking, Writing, Listening. 這句話用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句， The students who are going to take the courses have at least three years of English learning experience.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， you will also work as an advisor for the students English club and our school’s English newspaper.這句話用了work as“擔(dān)當(dāng)：，還有范文還使用了 Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。