Question

內(nèi)容：勞動(dòng)節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，我們將放三天假。有人打算去旅游，有人準(zhǔn)備待在家里。請(qǐng)為你自己制定一份節(jié)日計(jì)劃，并談?wù)勀愕睦碛伞?br />要求：1. 有明確的計(jì)劃和相應(yīng)的理由
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。
3. 開(kāi)頭句已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off.

Answer 1

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off. It’s great. Personally, I think it will be a wonderful holiday. Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. Also, during the holiday, the weather must be fine, neither too hot nor too cold. It’s the right season for an outing. I can’t wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends. Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. I decide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework.

試題分析：這篇作文是半開(kāi)放式作文，因?yàn)橥ㄟ^(guò)題目要求，只知道為你自己制定一份節(jié)日計(jì)劃，并談?wù)勀愕睦碛�。所以�?yīng)該分兩個(gè)內(nèi)容，計(jì)劃和理由，而且具體的內(nèi)容要考生結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況去表達(dá)，重點(diǎn)是盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文最大的特點(diǎn)是短語(yǔ)和句式多變：have…. Off放幾天假，neither … nor…既不，也不， can’t wait to迫不及待的， attach great importance to重視， make use of 利用，Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. 這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. 這句話(huà)用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. 這句話(huà)用了固定句型。