Question

You are finding it more and more difficult to communicate with your dad / mom, because
1. he / she can’ t understand you when sometimes you say “你已經(jīng)out了”, “今天我們?nèi)�FB一下吧” and so on;
2. he / she sometimes checks your cellphone or schoolbag, trying to find something secret belonging to you;
3. when you fail in an exam, he / she scolds (責(zé)備) more than comforts and encourages you.
根據(jù)上面提示用英語(yǔ)給你的爸爸或媽媽寫一封信，反映你現(xiàn)在的心情，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的想法和希望。（任選以上一個(gè)原因、兩個(gè)原因或三個(gè)原因進(jìn)行陳述均可。）
詞數(shù)120左右。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）
Dear Dad / Mom,
I love you, so I’ m writing to                                            
                                                                           
                                                                         
I would be very happy if you could accept my advice.

Answer 1

Dear Dad / Mom,
I love you, so I’m writing to talk about the three problems coming up in our daily life. I do hope you can take them seriously.
First, please learn something new, especially the languages popular among us teenagers, such as “You out” and “Let’s go to FB today”, because only in this way can we make ourselves understood. What’s more, those languages sound a little bit humorous, don’t they? Secondly, I don’t have any secrets you don’t know. Even if any, they are mine. So, please stop checking my cellphone or schoolbag, will you? Thirdly and also most importantly, I need your comfort and encouragement when I fail in an exam. You probably never know your scolding makes me lose heart and faith in myself.
I would be very happy if you could accept my advice.

這篇文章是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的書信，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)前面的提示要求學(xué)生梳理出相關(guān)要求，是一種半開(kāi)放性作文，對(duì)學(xué)生的要求比較高，在寫作過(guò)程中可以運(yùn)用較高級(jí)的詞匯和句型來(lái)提高文章的檔次，也要注意使用連接成分，使行文更流暢。