Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分35分）
假設(shè)你是李華，上周六你班外出野炊時(shí)你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)使用一次性紙杯 (disposable cup)。請(qǐng)你就此問(wèn)題按以下提示給某中學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 野炊情況簡(jiǎn)介；
2. 發(fā)現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題及其危害；
3. 你的倡議及理由。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
3. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student in Ziyang, Sichuan. I am writing to tell you about an environmental problem.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student in Ziyang, Sichuan. I am writing to tell you about an environmental problem.
Last Saturday my classmates and I went for a picnic. At noon we had a wonderful lunch on the top of a mountain. To my surprise, I saw most of my classmates were using disposable cups, which I think this is a serious environmental problem.
As we all know, disposable cups are made of wood and the more cups we use, the more trees will be cut down to get the wood to make them. Therefore, it is never environmentally friendly to use disposable cups. I hope measures can be taken to forbid the use of disposable cups or use fewer. If everyone does so, we will have more trees and our world will become more beautiful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，要求包括以下內(nèi)容1. 野炊情況簡(jiǎn)介；2. 發(fā)現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題及其危害；3. 你的倡議及理由。寫(xiě)作要有條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。
野炊情況介紹時(shí)要注意用過(guò)去時(shí)，因?yàn)檫@是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事。To my surprise, I saw most of my classmates were using disposable cups, which I think this is a serious environmental problem.這句話中用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，指代上文的內(nèi)容。發(fā)現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題及其危害是普遍現(xiàn)象，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，the more cups we use, the more trees will be cut down to get the wood to make them.“越…越….”的句型用的很恰當(dāng)，it is never environmentally friendly to use disposable cups.這是it的句型。最后的倡議及理由用了I hope ….. If everyone does so, ……,
此外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要求句與句之間要連貫，像這篇作文，As we all know， Therefore的使用，使文章自然連貫。