Question

中美中學(xué)生交流項(xiàng)目安排一批美國中學(xué)生來天津一周體驗(yàn)中國文化，在網(wǎng)上挑選適合住宿的家庭(homestay family)。假如你是光明中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李津，請根據(jù)下表提供的信息用英語給項(xiàng)目美方負(fù)責(zé)人Mike Smith寫一封郵件，提出申請。

You	good at English，active
Your parents	friendly, cook well
Your house	clean，comfortable，extra bedrooms
Your plans	to show the student around…

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students．
 
 
 
 
 
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the home-stay families for the American students. As an active girl studying in Guangming School of Tianjin, I’m quite good at English. My parents, who are kind and friendly, are in favor of my idea that I host an American student. We have a clean and comfortable house, which lies in a beautiful area of the city. Luckily, we have extra rooms for guests. My mother cooks well so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food. What’s more, my father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area. I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin

 
試題分析：本文是材料和圖表結(jié)合的作文，通過認(rèn)真讀題，我們明白了寫作要求和目的。本文要求寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于住宿家庭的。應(yīng)該用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)多是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作前最好先根據(jù)給出的提綱，寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用。最后串聯(lián)起來。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：我是光明中學(xué)學(xué)生，本人擅長英語；我母親擅長烹飪，父親會開車；家里的房子干凈、舒適，有客房；計(jì)劃帶美國學(xué)生在周圍游覽；盼望回信。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號運(yùn)用正確。在150詞左右的篇幅中，恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了一些短語和句式，如用動詞的-ing形式和who、which引導(dǎo)的定語從句做定語，尤其是in favor of my idea that I host an American student運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句說明自己的想法idea，還有appreciate、looking forward to等比較高級的詞匯都可圈可點(diǎn)。