Question

最近，你校組織高三學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場討論。主題是：要不要集中進(jìn)行晚自習(xí)。根據(jù)下圖提供的信息，寫一篇150字左右的英語短文，客觀地介紹一下討論的情況，注意要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)。

Answer 1

Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.
60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.
There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.
At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.

試題分析：考查數(shù)據(jù)分析類型短文寫作。要求考生根據(jù)所給數(shù)據(jù)篩選出文章的要點(diǎn)，再轉(zhuǎn)換成英語。本題在寫作的時(shí)候要注意百分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)法，不要出現(xiàn)中國式的英語表達(dá)。在組織要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，仍然要注意使用多種句式如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等讓文章充滿了變化。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候也要注意使用諺語，讓文章更為地道，有英語的味道。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于圖表題的一種，要求考生根據(jù)圖表，篩選出要點(diǎn)。注意分?jǐn)?shù)百分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)法，在本文的寫作中，盡量避免出現(xiàn)中國式英語的句式，要靈活運(yùn)用各種倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等方式，讓文章充滿變化。