Question

假如你校和加拿大某中學(xué)是友好學(xué)校，對方�？瘉硇帕私饽阈５倪x修課開設(shè)情況。請根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)Ψ浇榻B這一情況。(選修課optional course) （ 120詞左右）

課程門類	上課時間	學(xué)生對課程的看法	學(xué)生建議
六種：書法、英語口語、音樂欣賞、電影欣賞、攝影和游泳，學(xué)生可任選	每周二、五下午 4：30～6：00	很有趣；能學(xué)到許多課外知識；有實踐機會 … …	增加選修課；減少作業(yè)量；多組織參觀、了解社會的活動 … …

Answer 1

This term our school is offering six optional courses for students to choose from. The courses include Handwriting, Spoken English, Music Appreciation, Movie Appreciation, Photographing and Swimming. They are given from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
Students take great interest in the optional courses. They say they have learned a lot that can’t be learned in the textbooks. At the same time, many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class. Therefore, the students hope more optional courses will be offered in the future and that more trips and visits will be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside the school.

試題分析：這是一篇表格類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，結(jié)合具體內(nèi)容要用一般現(xiàn)在時，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。象many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class.這是what引導(dǎo)賓語從句，特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是時間的表達法。from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
點評：本文屬于表格類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。