Question

書面表達（滿分25分）
5月 1日,高二(3)班的學生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去陽光敬老院
(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動(送水果、打掃、聊天等)。假如你是校
英語報的記者李華,請按下列要點用英語寫一則100-120個詞的新聞報道.
注意:
1.時間、地點、人物活動；
2.老人們的反映；
3.簡短評論；
4.報道的標題和記者姓名已給出.(不計詞數(shù))。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
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By Li Hua, School Newspaper

Answer 1

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day,Li Yue and Zhuang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

試題分析：考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性�？忌�要多使用復雜句，如范文里面的句子, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.這句話用了非謂語動詞。Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.這句話用的是獨立主格結構。
點評：作文要層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，切合作文要求，句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級詞匯及句型。