Question

隨著人類社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的動植物瀕臨滅絕。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以 “Wildlife Protection”為題為某中學(xué)生英語報寫一篇100詞左右的稿件，說明如何保護(hù)瀕危野生動植物，以紀(jì)念5月22日“世界野生動物保護(hù)日”。

原因	1、棲息地破壞     2、食物短缺     3、過度獵殺     ……
如何保護(hù)	1、保護(hù)環(huán)境       2、建立保護(hù)區(qū)   3、禁止捕殺    ……
呼吁	……

注意：（1）短文要包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. ________

Answer 1

With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. Above all, their habitat is threatened, resulting in a lack of food. Besides, they are being hunted without mercy.
As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too. Second, we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves. As for the government, it should pass laws to prevent endangered animals from being hunted. 
In a word, human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone makes a little contribution, it will make a big difference for wild animals. Let’s take action right now.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。