Question

在一次課堂討論中，大家對朋友和友誼進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀銓τ颜x的看法。

為什么需要朋友	1、 有許多問題靠自己無法解決，要靠朋友幫助； 2、可與朋友分享快樂、分擔(dān)憂愁,，少受寂寞。
什么是真正的朋友和友誼	1、敬重你而你也敬重的人； 2、在你需要他的時(shí)候絕不離開你； 3、犧牲自己的利益，給你真誠和無私的幫助； 4、鼓勵(lì)你堅(jiān)持正確的東西，少犯些錯(cuò)誤。
你對友誼的看法	（自由發(fā)揮）

 注意：1、短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)；
2、詞數(shù)150左右；
3、短文開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
In life we can hardly do without friends.__________________________________
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Answer 1

In life we can hardly do without friends. There are many difficulties and problems we can’t overcome with only our own efforts. Besides, we need friends to share our joys and sorrows, otherwise we will feel lonely.
What is true friendship? A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect. As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need. On the contrary, they will offer you sincere and selfless help even at the cost of their own interests. Moreover, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell us not to do what is wrong or illegal.
In my opinion, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other. Whenever we have problems, we never hesitate to offer support to each other. Besides, we are supposed to help and trust each other. In conclusion, true friendship will stand the test of time.

試題分析：試題討論的話題是有關(guān)朋友和友誼的，貼近考生實(shí)際生活。容易入題。給出的要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，前面兩大部分內(nèi)容只需依據(jù)提綱的內(nèi)容翻譯出來即可。文章主要圍繞“為什么需要朋友，什么是真正的朋友和友誼，你對友誼的看法”三部分展開，其中“你對友誼的看法”要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，屬于半開放性話題,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.
點(diǎn)評：在寫作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。尤其是“你對友誼的看法”部分要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，要注意不要偏離文章中心。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。