Question

2011年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高，但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā)了熱議。最近，某網(wǎng)站舉行了一次題為“對(duì)今年春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度”的調(diào)查，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下餅圖(pie chart) 所示信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

注意：1. 對(duì)所給提示，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 植入廣告： product placement 形象image
The 2011 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programs.
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Answer 1

The 2011 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programs.
As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programs naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself. However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programs. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.
From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programs. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account.

試題分析： 圖表類作文的形式及特點(diǎn)是以表格形式將統(tǒng)計(jì)的數(shù)據(jù)或被說(shuō)明的事物 直接用表格形式體現(xiàn)出來(lái). 側(cè)重于數(shù)據(jù)的排序。此類題目基本不要求考生對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容進(jìn)行發(fā)揮，主要將所給信息用句子完整準(zhǔn)確連貫的表達(dá)出來(lái).主要考查同學(xué) 們?nèi)�方面的能�?A.信息處理或整理的能力 如信息之間能否合并為邏輯關(guān)系或處理先后順序等B. 組詞造句能力 如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性C. 連句成文能力 信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性，基礎(chǔ)寫作解題步驟：1.審題2.列要點(diǎn)3.依要點(diǎn) 擬草綱 組織成句.4.構(gòu)篇章擴(kuò)句成文.5.檢查潤(rùn)色。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了好的詞組：have nothing to do with和…無(wú)關(guān)，draw a conclusion得出一個(gè)結(jié)論， take sth into account把…考慮在內(nèi)，還有范文使用了多變的句式：.As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programs naturally. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself. 這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)從句， 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it.這句話用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.這句話用了同位語(yǔ)從句，還有范文使用了However, Furthermore,  In my opinion,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。