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下圖表為近幾年中美兩國(guó)電子商務(wù)發(fā)展比較及其將來(lái)幾年的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表信息，以 “E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China”為題，為某英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫一篇稿子，內(nèi)容須包括：
1、圖表主要信息（用30個(gè)左右英語(yǔ)單詞描述）；
2、中國(guó)電子商務(wù)增長(zhǎng)的原因（經(jīng)濟(jì)穩(wěn)步增長(zhǎng)，人民收入提高，人口大于美國(guó)，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物方便）；
3、你的觀點(diǎn)（可從保護(hù)和規(guī)范電子商務(wù)市場(chǎng)談起）。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)150左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；
2、作文中不得提及你所在的學(xué)校及本人姓名。
3、參考詞匯：cybercrime網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪；phishing網(wǎng)絡(luò)釣魚

E-Commerce Sales and Growth 2008-2016 (China vs US)

E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China
    The chart shows China’s e-commerce sales started with only 20 billion USD in 2008, and
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Answer 1

One possible version：
E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China
The chart shows China’s e-commerce sales started with only 20 billion USD in 2008, and was about 60% of the US’s in 2011. However, it surpassed the US in 2013, and is expected to double that of the US in the near future.
There are several factors contributing to the rapid growth in e-commerce in China. Firstly, even though the world has experienced a serious economic decline, China has enjoyed a steady growth throughout, leading to people’s income increasing continuously. Secondly, China has a much larger population than the US, possessing the largest number of netizens in the world. Finally, people find it more convenient to shop online, and are more willing to purchase online than ever before.
The speedy e-commerce, I think, is just inevitable. What we should do is find effective ways to regulate the e-shopping market, improve the quality of e-service and prevent cybercrime like phishing, fraud and cheating, so as to enjoy a healthier and more prosperous e-commerce market in China.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇圖表作文，這類題型具有文字少，信息少，要點(diǎn)分散等特征。我們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)要領(lǐng)會(huì)圖表的全部信息，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。基本寫作模板為：首段要表明圖示信息，就本文來(lái)說(shuō)就是要介紹中國(guó)電子商務(wù)從2008年到2013年逐年增長(zhǎng)，而且還超過(guò)美國(guó)。第二段要得出結(jié)論并且分析原因；第三段提出自己的建議或看法。本文中列舉的原因較多，要注意使用表示層次或順序的連接詞，以使文章有層次感。此外，在寫作時(shí)盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文使用經(jīng)典的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)布局，第一段介紹了圖表提示的信息；第二段分析了造成這種狀況的幾點(diǎn)原因，包括經(jīng)濟(jì)穩(wěn)步增長(zhǎng)，人民收入提高，人口大于美國(guó)，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物方便等等，此段首句為主題句，然后用firstly、secondly、finally等有效的起到連接作用，使文章層次分明，條理清楚。在文章最后作者使用了一個(gè)涵蓋信息量大的長(zhǎng)句提出自己的建議和看法，充分顯示了作者駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力。